Q: How do you come up with titles and
character names? Do they change during the writing process?
When I wrote the first Cait Morgan
Mystery I knew I wanted to use a title that would be relatively easy to adapt
for a series. Katherine Hall Page’s “The Body in the….” series and MC Beaton’s
Hamish Macbeth’s “Death of a…” series used a framework to good effect, I
thought, and I wanted to avoid the alliteration or puns that tend to be
associated with truly cozy mysteries, because I have never thought of the Cait
Morgan Mysteries as cozy, but as “traditional”. I looked around at the various
series titles in the marketplace and saw that the words DEATH, DEAD, BODY,
MURDER and KILLING were quite popular, so decided to take a step aside and use
CORPSE in my titles.
Then, what to add? What defining factor/s might be used
repetitively? Since the first book dealt with the
murder of a man who managed to winkle people’s secrets out of them, I decided
upon “THE CORPSE WITH THE SILVER TONGUE”, and, as I played with the proposals I
was putting forward for seven more books in the series, I quickly realized all my victims worked well...an award-winning vintner had a GOLDEN
NOSE; an extremely green-thumbed plantswoman had an EMERALD THUMB; a
woman whose personal style was stuck in the 1960s had PLATINUM HAIR; a Welsh
choirmaster had SAPPHIRE EYES; a card-sharp died holding a DIAMOND HAND; a man had a large birthmark giving him a GARNET FACE, and a woman who wore vivid lipstick had RUBY LIPS.
I was thrilled, and made my proposals along these lines. They were accepted - YAY!
Then, when it came to my WISE Enquiries
Agency books, what I wanted to write was a “casebook” series, rather than a
series of “mysteries” (insofar as private investigators work on cases, which are
not – necessarily – “mysteries" or even murders). However, my publisher had other ideas, so the
tag “Mysteries” was added, and I was left to use the word “Case” in the title. These books are “cozy” in that they are village-based, with recurring
characters and they are really quite gentle, so I was happy to work with alliteration
at least.
The main case (there are several in each book, sometimes linked) in
the first book centered on a dowager duchess who might, or might not, be losing
her marbles, so I proposed THE CASE OF THE DOTTY DOWAGER. For the second book
the main case allowed for the title THE CASE OF THE MISSING MORRIS DANCER. However,
for the third book, my publisher didn't like my proposed titles of THE CASE OF THE BEWILDERED BOOKSELLER, or THE CASE OF THE MURDERED MINIATURIST, or THE CASE OF THE ARROGANT ARTIST - all of which related to cases within the book - rather, he wanted to focus not on the “problem” but the
client; hence the title became THE CASE OF THE CURIOUS COOK. I got quite a few emails from readers asking why the book was called that, as there wasn't a cook featured in any of the cases, so I wrote polite replies pointing out that one of the
commissioning clients in the book had once been a TV cook - named The Curious Cook by BBC Wales - before she became the joint owner of a bookshop with her father...where the main case originated.
For the fourth
I convinced them to come back to the nature of the problem, rather than the
client, and they accepted THE CASE OF
THE UNSUITABLE SUITOR. As you can see, there’s a play on words throughout this
series which – I think – works well for the sub-genre.
I will add that each
publisher only ever referred to “SILVER TONGUE” or “GOLDEN NOSE” dropping “THE
CORPSE WITH THE...”, or to “DOTTY” or “COOK” for the WISE series in all our communications. I have to say I can
cope with that – but have always felt it disrespectful of publishers (and/or
authors) to simply refer to a book by its initials in public communications (eg: Facebook etc).
“TCWTSN” means nothing to
me, nor do I think it conveys to a reader the amount of love, care and
attention I have put into the book, nor is respectful of the amount of time
they have spent/will spend reading THE CORPSE WITH THE SILVER TONGUE.
Recently, I published “MURDER KEEPS NO CALENDAR”
– an anthology of twelve short stories and novellas, one relating to each month
of the year. When deciding upon a title for this book I knew it would end up as
one of a pair, so the title had to be “adaptable” in some way. I liked the fact
that the proverb/traditional saying of “Death keeps no calendar” was first
formally recorded and encoded in a book published by Welshman George Herbert (born
in Powys, where the WISE Agency is located!) in the early 17th
century, but the use of the word “Death” sounded a bit too close to “horror”,
rather than “murder mystery” to me, so I changed the first word to “Murder”. I've also decided that the
second anthology will be called “MURDER KNOWS NO SEASON”…which I think works well with the short story collection (it’s an anthology
of four novellas, each relating to one season of the year).
As for character names…I have to
admit that’s a whole different (and maybe much longer blog post). Suffice to
say, my own attitudes, lots of research into popular/unpopular names at the year of birth in the right country, and (importantly) in the correct social strata, via google (and the fear of potential lawsuits!) play a part.
Cathy
Ace is the Bony Blithe Award-winning author of The Cait Morgan Mysteries and
The WISE Enquiries Agency Mysteries. You can find out more about Cathy,
her work and her characters at her website, where you can also sign up for her
newsletter with news, updates and special offers: http://cathyace.com/
I wish I had consulted with you before each and every title...Brilliant logic and the results prove it!
ReplyDeleteThanks Susan - I still spent sleepless nights on each one! :-)
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