Sunday, March 11, 2018

Research--How Much Should you Use?


Terry Shames here:

The question this week is how you decide how much of your background research you put into your books. I write a series set in Texas and my basic research was done when I was a child. The town of Jarrett Creek is based on the town where my grandparents lived when I was growing up. The smell, sights, sounds, even the taste are part of my cell structure. That part of Texas can be bone-dry one minute, so that the smell of dust permeates everything, and then it can be drenched with rain for days on end, bringing with it the scent of swampland—earthy and rich. A railroad track runs through town, as does a main state highway, bisecting the town and lending reality to the term “the other side of the tracks.” But in this case, both sides are “the other side.” When I was growing up the Santa Fe railroad came through town. A train whistle and the sound of the great wheels churning down the tracks throws me into the memory of how that sound made me restless and lonesome all at the same time. I dreamed of being the first female hobo, hopping the train for parts unknown. As for the taste, the land around Somerville is full of clay and the water tastes of iron. You can’t find that kind of research on the internet. This series full yembraces the concept “write what you know.” I know this town.

                                                  


But I do have research to do. Early on, since I was going to be writing about a police chief, I needed to know the details of police departments in small towns in Texas—the personnel, the buildings, the jurisdictions, their uniforms, their vehicles. And I needed to know about guns. That’s a particularly fraught subject, because gun-lovers are alert to anything you get wrong, and gun-haters don’t want to hear about it. Combining the two made it easy—be specific, but don’t dwell on it. I read thrillers in which every single detail of a protagonist’s weapon(s) is given in detail. I suppose some thriller readers care, but I don’t. I want to say to the writer, “Good for you! You did your research, and it shows. Too much.”

But there are other things I include in books that I don’t know so much about. A chief of police in a small town in Texas encounters all kinds of mayhem that I have to know something about. Here’s my secret: I don’t do advance research. I write scenes the way I think they would actually happen—and then I look up the reality. I have read too many books where it was obvious that the writer had done a lot of research and either was determined not to have it go to waste or didn’t know when they gone too far in writing it, so that it became cumbersome to read. When I write it the way I “think” it should be, I concentrate on what my protagonist is experiencing.

Here’s an example: In An Unsettling Crime for Samuel Craddock, a prequel set in the early 1980s, Samuel is a newly minted chief of police. He goes to Austin to view an autopsy of burn victims. I thought I ought to read a little something about how that would be done. It turned out not to be necessary. I went on-line and immediately saw a photo of a burn victim on an autopsy table. That’s all I needed. My imagination did the rest—the sight, the sound, the smell—all through Samuel Craddock’s eyes as a young man determined to get through the autopsy without disgracing himself. After the book was published someone asked me how I got the autopsy so accurate. My husband is a retired physician and I asked him if he noticed anything amiss in the autopsy scene. He looked at me in amazement and said it never occurred to him that I had never attended an autopsy—especially of a burn victim. It seemed totally authentic to him. Anybody who watches crime on TV has seen little bits of autopsies, but I focused on the things that someone would focus on who had never attended one.

Sometimes, I do waste writing time when I don’t research in advance. After I wrote the autopsy chapter, I went back to make sure the details of the place it was done were accurate—and discovered that the current building where autopsies are done in Austin is not the one where they were done in the 1980’s. I had to rewrite those descriptions. Another glitch was discovered by my copyeditor (bless her!). I had included the name of an economy motel chain, and she discovered that that motel chain did not have a presence in Texas until the late 1980’s.

                   

Not only is accuracy important to me for my own satisfaction, but people will write you about things you get wrong—or that they think you get wrong. One man wrote to tell me that alfalfa is not actually grown in Texas. I know darned good and well that it is. But who am I to argue with a Texan? I told him that I must have been mistaken and that my daddy called any field of fodder “alfalfa.” Another man wrote to tell me that police chiefs are not appointed by sheriffs in Texas. Thank goodness I had actually done my research early on, and found that in some small towns that is exactly the way it’s done.

I guess my bottom line answer to the question is, I do only the research I need to do, and I only put in what needs to be there.



Friday, March 9, 2018

A Totally Unbiased Review of White Heat ;-)


Write your own review of YOUR last book.

by Paul D. Marks

Well, who better to review my book than me. Because no one can be more objective, neutral, fair, honest, trustworthy, impartial, disinterested, unprejudiced (if you want more adjectives than this I’m gonna have to hit the thesaurus) than me? But, as the saying goes, If I am not for myself, who will be for me? If I am not for others, what am I? And if not now, when? I guess the answer to the question of when is now:

And, taking a little liberty here, but not Cinderella liberty, instead of reviewing my last novel to come out, Vortex, I’m going to review my first, White Heat…because it’s being re-released in May by a new publisher (Down & Out) as a precursor to its sequel coming out in the fall. And besides, I have pictures of the new cover so I want to share them

So here goes:


In Paul D. Marks’ explosive new thriller White Heat P.I. Duke Rogers finds himself in a racially charged situation. The case might have to wait... The immediate problem: getting out of South Central Los Angeles in one piece – during the 1992 “Rodney King” riots – and that’s just the beginning of his problems. White Heat begins where the Rodney King Riots leave off.

Duke finds an old “friend” for a client. The client’s “friend,” an up and coming African-American actress, ends up dead. Duke knows his client did it. Feeling guilty, he wants to find the client/killer. He starts his mission by going to the dead actress’ family in South Central L.A. While there the riots ignite. 

While Duke tracks down the killer he must also deal with the racism of his partner, Jack, and from Warren, the murder victim’s brother, who is a mirror image of Jack in that department. He must also confront his own possible latent racism – even as he’s in an interracial relationship with the dead woman’s sister.

The novel looks at race and racism from everyone involved, black and white, and no one gets off unscathed.

If there’s a criticism to be had it’s that the subplot of the woman who hires Duke to scare off her stalker could be better integrated into the main plot. But a little birdie spy told me that that issue is taken care of and the subplot is much more integral to the main story in Broken Windows, the sequel to White Heat coming out in Fall 2018, and which follows a similar plot structure, 

Here’s what others have said about White Heat:

“...taut crime yarn set in 1992 against the turmoil of the Los Angeles riots that followed the acquittal of the police officers charged with assaulting motorist Rodney King.... the author ably evokes the chaos that erupted after the Rodney King verdict.”
—Publishers Weekly

“WHITE HEAT is a riveting read of mystery, much recommended.”
—Midwest Book Review

“[WHITE HEAT] really caught early 90s LA, in all its sordid glory. And had me turning pages late into the night. I think WH is up there with the best of the LA novels, but has an air of authenticity that many lack.”
—Woody Haut, journalist, author of Neon Noir: Contemporary American Crime Fiction; Pulp Culture: Hardboiled Fiction & the Cold War; Heartbreak and Vine: The Fate of Hardboiled Writers in Hollywood


The original White Heat cover


“Expect the unexpected...in an action-walloping award-winner of harrowing twists and turns...”
—Gordon Hauptfleisch, Seattle Post Intelligencer and BlogCritics.org

“A gripping tale of prejudice and deceit, set against the tumultuous backdrop of the 1992 L.A. riots. White Heat is all the title promises it to be.” 
—Darrell James, award-winning author of Nazareth Child and Sonora Crossing

“Written in a staccato, noir style as intense as the 1992 LA riots, WHITE HEAT is a stunning debut novel by LA native Paul Marks. It grabs you with the intensity of the riots and keeps the anxiety and tension pushing full-throttle right up to the bittersweet ending. Heat is a hard-hitting, noir detective thriller, that also deals with tough issues like racism, the “diversity” of racism, and the human condition.”
—Andrew McAleer, best-selling author of 101 Habits of Highly Successful Novelists and Fatal Deeds 

“I fell in love with Duke, Jack, and Rita. I also loved Teddie, even though we never met her alive.”
—Elizabeth Barone, ElizabethBarone.net

“This book is packed with action, suspense, a dab of humor at times, and basically all the ingredients needed for a great read. I highly recommend it and look forward to the next installment of Duke Rogers.”
—R.J. Parker True Crime Author and Amazon Top 500 Reviewer

“...Marks had me reliving those moments of fear – his details and descriptions made me feel like I was back in LA and it was all happening again... This book comes at a time when racial tensions are once again high in this country – so a reminder of just how terribly things can explode is always welcome.”
—Kat Yares, Amazon Vine Voice

“…Set at the time of the 1992 Rodney King riots, the novel provides a fictitious focus that serves as a metaphor for the social turmoil of the times. Marks writes fearlessly about his characters, and he also writes fearlessly about prejudice, rage and injustice….  Every page is on fire.”
—Jon P. Bloch, Kindle Book Review


Hang on tight for a white knuckle read!
Paul D. Marks' debut novel White Heat couldn't be better titled, since it burns like a phosphorous bomb, illuminating the mean streets of Los Angeles at a time when they were at their meanest, rawest and most incendiary: during the 1992 riots that tore the city apart after the Rodney King beating verdict. Those of us who lived through that time remember the wounds all too well, and, like the characters in this staggeringly-assured first novel, remain conflicted as to who should actually be blamed for inflicting them. What may be even more remarkable than Marks' evocation of one of LA's most challenging moments is his creation of that rarest of avises, a wholly original P.I. protagonist, in the form of Marion "Duke" Rogers, a former Navy SEAL who struggles to maintain his honor despite a near-crippling guilt complex. If that weren't enough, the author manages to propel his flawed hero into his dangerous, duty-bound quest through one of the most ingenious motives I can remember reading. White Heat is a tough, tersely-written book featuring tough, complicated, and not always lovable characters who might push many readers to the very edge of their comfort zone. But it's honest and it's real, and doesn't it doesn't pander to its audience by providing pat or phony answers to the many complex issues it raises. 
—M2

Well, it’s my book. What am I gonna do, trash it? 😉

White Heat is available for pre-order now:

Amazon
Down & Out Books

The new White Heat cover from Down & Out Books
Coming out in May 2018

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And now for the usual BSP:

I’m happy to say that my story “There’s An Alligator in My Purse” has been selected for the 2018 Bouchercon anthology, Sunny Places, Shady People, edited by Greg Herren. It's more off the wall than what I usually do, but I had a hell of a good time doing it.


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Thursday, March 8, 2018

One Star

"Write a review of your own latest book" By Catriona

Well, this is just unbearable. I've been fretting about writing this blog since I saw the week's topic on Monday.

For one thing I've never written a review before.

But that's not the real problem.

The real problem is that I come from a culture where "You love yourself" is a bitter insult and even "You're good to yourself" is quite a mean thing to say to anyone. So the only review it won't hurt to write is a savage one.

Here goes. My one-star, Amazon-style review of SCOT FREE (coming on the 8th of April in the US)


Review title:  Boooooring.

This is supposed to be a comic mystery but I didn't laugh once. I have a good sense of humor and I found nothing amusing in this confused and pointless read. It is not funny to kill a man by putting a firework inserted into his anatomy and the heroine is unlikable too. She is no good at choosing a partner and is a bad role model. She drinks too much alcohol and eats burritos from a food truck and is a very bad role model. And she has casual sex and there is infidelity and other unpleasant things. And she walks alone through a dangerous neighborhood at night without being frightened and so the "author" doesn't understand Real Life.

The scene in the morgue is disrespectful and the second scene in the morgue is disgusting and unnecessary. So is the language. There is no need to take the Lord's name in vain, it is a sign of weak talent and jumping on the "Bandwagon".

The characters are boring and not realistic. I am sick of politically correct rants that shoves social issues down you're throat instead of just telling a good story. Why does everyone have to be gay these days, it's not realistic. There is no need for alternative lifestyles to be in mysteries instead of in there own books. The story would be just the same with regular people. And why does there have to be all the "races" all the time? We have all seen movies and TV shows and we know that is not what California is really like. I am not a racist, but it is not realistic that this heroine would have these friends. And if anyone calls me a racist now, that is your racism showing.

The plot is stupid. It is boring and confusing. Nothing happens and it is too comlpicated to follow.  And it is not even properly explained at the end because of all the Loose Threads left "hanging".  I still don't know whodunit and the author is too lazy to finish the book properly and tell us whodunit. She probably just got sick of writing and so she stopped and that is the end.

And there is too much British slang. And the heroine isn't even British, she is Scottish! So there is no need for all the British slang instead of regular English. This writer should have paid an editor to catch the mistakes because they are off-putting and distracting. But she was too lazy.

I will never read another book by this Author unless she learns to write.

The Kindle version  is too expensive.



Wednesday, March 7, 2018

Satisfying Shorts for All Tastes...by Cathy Ace





This week’s challenge is tough, and I have wrestled with it for days. 

"Write a review of your own work," they said. 
"Oh good," I thought, "that’ll be fun." 
But it’s not. It’s really difficult.


My hat’s off to those who write meaningful reviews, as opposed to pithy blurbs; thank you for taking the time to read my work, and for the countless hours you must put into crafting well-thought-out pieces that satisfy readers looking for insights that will help them decide if the book you’re reviewing will appeal to them, and prove engaging.

Here goes....






Satisfying Shorts for All Tastes 
 Cathy Ace’s new anthology: 
MURDER KEEPS NO CALENDAR
 

“Life is like a box of chocolates.” Forrest Gump’s oft-quoted belief could be applied to Cathy Ace’s new anthology MURDER KEEPS NO CALENDAR, which contains a variety of soft centered shorts, chewier novellas, and even a few tough-nut surprises. Having been shortlisted for the Arthur Ellis Award for Best Short Story in 2017, I am pleased this author has decided to pull together a wide selection of her short, and longer, stories in this volume, providing readers with the perfect companion for a rainy, snowy, sunny or just any day.


In this collection of twelve murderous tales – each one associated with a different month of the year – fans of Ace’s two successful series finally get answers to the questions: “How did Cait Morgan and Bud Anderson first meet?” and “Why did the women who work at the WISE Enquiries Agency decide to become private investigators?” I also predict that for those who haven’t yet met Ace’s series characters, this satisfying-in-itself volume will make them want to read more of her work, and I urge them to do so.




The anthology opens with a short story entitled DEAR GEORGE, one of two tales that have already been produced for BBC Radio 4, and the first short story Ace ever had published. It’s got quite a twist in the tale/tail, something Ace manages to deliver time and time again in this book. This is possibly most in evidence in the short story “Shannah’s Racecar” – which should come with a “Whiplash is Possible” warning. 


Welsh Canadian professor of criminal psychology Cait Morgan features in three stories, one of which allows for some of the niftiest ratiocination I’ve read outside Conan Doyle’s. The WISE women feature in just one, but it's the one which explains the dark truth behind why they came together, and stick together. In each case the characters Ace’s readers have come to love in her – to date – dozen novels have a brighter light thrown upon their backstories, something I found made me want to revisit some of her early Cait Morgan books, which I first read five or six years ago. 




A recurring character readers meet for the first time in this collection is Detective Inspector Evan Glover, for whom I developed a surprisingly rapid respect. Glover’s an endearing chap, thankfully lacking the perturbations that seem to plague most fictional DIs, and his DS, Liz Stanley, is a diligent Bristolian, whose main challenge is getting used to living and working in South Wales where her accent causes great amusement. I liked them, and I think Ace’s existing fans will also warm to them, along with Glover’s intelligent wife, Betty.


Other standalone stories offer a variety of laugh-out-loud moments, a slow-burn example of domestic suspense, a fast-paced thriller, historical cogitations on the value of human life, and a smattering of surprising serial killers. None of these stories are likely to alienate Ace's current body of readers, but they do suggest the author's recently announced plan to work more in the realm of domestic suspense/thriller/procedural is likely to be based upon a firm foundation.


Ace’s signature ability to transport readers to the places she’s writing about is on display – stories are set in diverse locations including Florence, Shanghai, an Oxfordshire country tea shop, and both Wales and Canada. As always, I could not only see her settings, but enjoyed the sounds and smells that accompany them, always lifting her descriptions from the page and transforming this readers’ own surroundings. 


VERDICT: A satisfying selection of stories which reward the reader with puzzles solved, cases cracked, friendships formed, and killers caught, which should be on your bookshelf in case you find yourself with anything between fifteen minutes and several hours to spare.Will appeal to those who enjoy sleuths, procedurals, thrillers, domestic suspense, and even laugh out loud mysteries. Link to view, click here.
5 stars *****

You can find out more about Cathy, her work and her characters at her website, where you can also sign up for her newsletter with news, updates and special offers: http://cathyace.com/

Monday, March 5, 2018

A Village Mystery with French Atmosphere

Q: A little BSP. Write your own review of YOUR last book.

- from Susan

Funny. This had me sitting with fingers frozen above the keyboard. Ask me to write a review about YOUR last book, and I’m off and running. Ask me to review a stranger’s mystery (which I used to do for a newspaper) and I can do it. But my own book? After all, I wouldn’t have written it, shared it with my agent, let her submit it to a publisher if I didn’t think it was good. But…I could quote other reviewers who liked it, but that’s a cheat. Okay, here goes.

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LOVE & DEATH IN BURGUNDY, St. Martin’s Minotaur, 2017

After three years of living in the small town of Reigny-sur-Canne, all Katherine Goff really wants is to be accepted by her neighbors into their little community. When the elderly Frenchman who lives in the chateau is found dead at the bottom of a staircase, Katherine finds herself drawn deeper and deeper into the small town’s secrets. A motherless teenager, a malicious French widow, a brash music producer, and a would-be Agatha Christie are among those caught up in a storm that threatens to turn Katherine’s quiet life upside down.

Small town mysteries are reader favorites. Ordinary people, frequently charming, of course, seen at close enough range to relish their eccentricities. The landscapes can be scenic or cozy, but they draw readers into worlds like – but not quite like – our own, with the spice of scandal, gossip, and the occasional romance or delectable food as a bonus. Susan Shea has created a fictional crossroads town far off the tourist map in Burgundy that’s upended when scandal strikes.  She turns a wickedly funny eye on the snobberies that animate her characters’ lives, and the tone deaf Americans who descend on Reigny-sur-Canne in hopes of recreating their American lives with the addition of French food and atmosphere. Her protagonist is a different kind of American, someone who wants nothing so much as to blend in, but who can’t seem to please the town’s social arbiter.

The town’s gamine teenager, daughter of the local thief, provides a second perspective on the life of Reigny, often from her perch in a tree, from which she tosses fruit at passing cars and spies on everyone. Her crush on a spoiled American boy in town for the summer worries Katherine as it does us.

Adding their own artistic flavors to the story are Michael, Katherine’s would-be rock and roll musician husband, nursing a grudge against his former band; and a clumsy young Englishwoman who believes she could become the next Agatha Christie if only there were murders in the neighborhood from which to draw inspiration.

The mystery is solved, and it’s twistier than formulas would predict. Just as important is Katherine’s decision to stand up for someone the local society doesn’t approve of, even if it costs her her dream of becoming part of Reigny’s community. In the meantime, there is traditional Burgundian food to be cooked and eaten, and that’s no small thing, given that the region is known for its iconic dishes and brilliant wines. Altogether, “a pleasant getaway from hardcore killers,” as the New York Times Book Review noted.

(Sorry, Minds, I just had to add that last!)

DRESSED FOR DEATH IN BURGUNDY, the sequel, comes out May 1, 2018, and my little village is animated again by death, and the pending celebration of Christmas.




"Not since my first visit to Louise Penny's Three Pines have I encountered a more beguiling fictional world..." - Catriona McPherson

"Delightful and highly entertaining" - Sheila Connolly

Thursday, March 1, 2018

I Gotta Be Me


Is it better to be original or to give ‘em what they want? And, would you do it for free?

From Jim 

🎵   I GOTTA BE ME   ðŸŽµ

“A man’s gotta do what a man’s gotta do.” 
—Popeye


If I had been following trends or trying to figure out what readers wanted, I never would have embarked on writing a first-person female narrator in my Ellie Stone mysteries. I began my series featuring a plucky 1960s heroine because she was what I wanted to write. Had to write. Sure, I hoped readers would love her and make me rich by buying loads of my books. But that was not my original motivation. And it doesn’t mean I gave ’em what they wanted either.

Oh, my first book, STYX & STONE, was received well enough. But no one hoisted me on their shoulders to carry me from the room. And there were a couple of extremely unpleasant voices challenging whether it was appropriate for a man to write a woman in the first place. Not necessarily whether I had done a decent job of that, but whether I had the right to do it all. One troll who trashed the book famously (well, not so famously) proclaimed she hadn’t read the book and didn’t need to. I, a man, couldn’t possibly have done a good job of writing from the female side of the tracks. I certainly do not want to give people like that what they want.

I believe that even if you can fool some of the people some of the time, as Lincoln so rightly observed (Hell, just look at our last election...), I would hasten to add that you can’t fool them for long. If a writer doesn’t believe in what s/he is writing, it will bleed through the ink, and readers will sniff it it out. So, as for “giving ’em what they want,” I say nope.

Do I strive, therefore, to be original? I’m not sure. But I am passionate about what I write. And, as with anything I feel passionately about, I would do it for free.